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Genesis WIP by GeorgeLovesyArt Genesis WIP by GeorgeLovesyArt
Current piece I'm working on, it a WIP at the moment would be cool to get some crits :)
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I really like the ''Style'' you drew this picture, it really gets the focus on the lighting beam and the nicely detailed wings. What i also like about this picture is the detailed armour especially the helmet!!. it got really awsome details. I hope you put more detail in the lighting beam tho. maybe some glowing effect around the arms? anyways i think this is a really nicely drawn picture who really needs more crits. i hope you will upload more of these kind of pictures (i really like your style)!

Hope this critique helped you a little bit :)

xXHerculeXx
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:iconchooky2103:
Chooky2103 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
It's a mechanical freaking fairy! It's freaking awesoem!
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! :)
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:iconsweet-gem:
Sweet-Gem Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Epiiiiiiiiiiiiiiic. X3
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:iconkuzco890:
kuzco890 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome!!!!
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:iconvevans0009:
vevans0009 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Gorgeous so far!
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you
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:iconjoshuacamacho:
JoshuaCamacho Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your piece already appears to be finished. Whatever you intend on adding I'd love to see.
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!! I'll keep ya posted on the progress
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:iconjoshuacamacho:
JoshuaCamacho Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nod 
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:iconlepelican75:
LePelican75 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist
Wooooow Amazing start ! Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap 
Can't wait the end ! 
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:iconresistforever95:
ResistForever95 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student Filmographer
WIP? The finished project is going to be amazing! 
Love this character
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Haha thanks! Can't wait to get it all done
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:iconart-eli:
Art-Eli Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
beautiful one! i love the roughness and the lights, i can't wait for the final piece :)
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:iconawkwardmage:
AwkwardMage Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I like the slimness of the arms and torso, that helps communicate that this is a warrior.

The pose doesn't communicate the force of the blast though. The shoulder should be hunched and the torso should be tilted forward. Like an ironman blasting pose.

Great work on this, I like what you have here.
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:iconlumberjacck:
lumberjacck Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Those wings are epicly done! Love 
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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RuptureFarmz Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, although a wonderful piece so far, there are strange depth differences with the layers, specifically the back. Also, some effects and textures you applied seem floaty, and don't seem more of glass, energy, or metal; a great example of what I mean would be the shoulder, with the armor itself and the energy conduit or metal engraving. The wings themselves are pleasing to the eye, but as with many scifi photoshop artists, some of the metal components look disconnected and inconsistent, really drawing away from the many things you did well with on this image. The biggest issue with this has to be the back and the hindquarters. The back looks completely disconnected from the rest of the body, almost as if it's a separate entity completely. Honestly, this has it's share of great points and glaring errors, but I am sure that the final product will be excellent, looking back on your previous projects. Keep up the great work!
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CHIEFironhawk Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Sick!! In the coolest way!! :)
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Cheers!
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:iconblackvegetable:
Blackvegetable Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Looks wickedly promising! :D
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:) thanks!!!!
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:iconblackvegetable:
Blackvegetable Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
No problem! :bow:
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:iconundergroundbydesign:
UndergroundByDesign Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is turning out spectacularly, at least so far. But looking at it in every way I could, the backside of the armor looks... Flat. The left of the creature/suit's back seems to drop off from what's in the foreground pretty substantially, and I would recommending rendering the two sides to achieve a visible flow between them. The armor plating on the... Butt, for lack of a batter term in this case, like the back, just needs a little lighting work, to achieve the sense of thickness and depth that you have in the foreground. I'm looking forward to seeing the finalized product! Keep up the good work!
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for the crit! :) Been really helpful, stay tuned I'll post the finished version in a few days
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:iconundergroundbydesign:
UndergroundByDesign Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Wonderful to hear! I eagerly await the finished product! C:
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CryoWind Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Agreed, I keep looking at this one and the only flaw that I can see so far (since I freaking LOVE this piece, and I am now following your work) is the left side of the back. It almost looks like two different people standing very close together. I think it's because of the two different colors: more red tone on the left and more blue tone on the right. At first when I looked at it I thought the character was standing perfectly profile. It doesn't quite click for me that it's the same thing yet. But like I said, no other critiques. This is simply brilliant. You're the type of artist on here that makes me want to build myself up from scratch as an artist.
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Intimidator777 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well done. Loving the subtle glow of the wings and the brighter glow of the energy coming out of her hand.  the detailing is also really good too.
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! Still have a lot to do on it though :)
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:iconintimidator777:
Intimidator777 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome 😊
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:iconmalike201:
malike201 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student
is that z-brush ??? wow
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Lol no it's all painted
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:iconmalike201:
malike201 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student
can you teach me? lol
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Haha I'd be a terrible teacher
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SotoXCross Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
This is absolutely awesome. Amazing work :)
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconknoe83:
knoe83 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
so badass
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Cheers!
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:iconwoodspider:
WoodSpider Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student General Artist
Angelic!
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconwhendell:
Whendell Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
awesome work, the final version should be amazing! :nod:
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! Yea I'm really enjoying making this so far!
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:iconwhendell:
Whendell Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! :wave:
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Atelinetis Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This character gonna be epic !! :) Do you think a name for she :)
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it! Na no names yet though
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:iconatelinetis:
Atelinetis Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I thing you should start thing about it :)  
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:iconwjones215:
wjones215 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Very excellent job here.
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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Mojo-Smileyface Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
OMG I love this so much, the grey color with the pop of highlights, looks amazing. It is a WIP? I like it the way it is I think! I love the style, the composition is solid, anatomy is fine. Love that motion blur / sharp areas to draw focus. Adding a little more detail maybe in the torso would be a nice feature, show off your awesome Armour design!! ;D
Well done, and keep up this amazing work! :D
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:icongeorgelovesyart:
GeorgeLovesyArt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Haha thank you! Probs one of the best comments I've had in a while I'm glad you like it. Yea it is a WIP but I still feel I can really improve on it so I'm defo gonna spend some more time working on it. Also saw you're from NZ (high fives' you).
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Mojo-Smileyface Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you :), its my desktop pic on my computer at the moment, really keen to see how more amazing you can make it. :D
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