Vision: You seem to know what you want to do. The effect is there, the important bits present. However, you gleam over parts like the legs in a fashion that implies you're not quite sure or you're too lazy to detail them. Originality: While overall an interesting design, there isn't anything I would classify as unique to you. Many videogames have characters similar in appearance, which is likely where you drew inspiration. Technique: The backgrounds are interesting and give a sense of depth and mystery, but as the brush strokes get closer to the mech, they become distracting and pull attention away from the body. Impact: It definitely has the intended effects and causes just the right emotions to stir. I would love to see this as a finalized poster.